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Realistic Try 03

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Realistic Try 03-
I decided to try another realistic try.
I havnt done those ones in awhile:)
ummm.. its not the best, but i think i did improve from last time:)
The hair was kinda complicated on this one:S but i was just tryin things.
its only face, i wanted to improve in that: )
LOL and yeah!xD i was to lazy to draw the mouth so her hair is covering itxD sorry xD

Please, if u do have any critiqes,say them: ) It would really help:):) Thankyou!:D
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Nice pic ~
But there is some critique in here; Head form looks ok, and eye too, but ear is way too hight, it should be in middle of head's side, not up there. That mean its eather eye or ear what goes wrong... Coloring and shadings are ok, but the color you've used looks kind of dirty (if you understand what I mean?). It would help if you would try more clear and bright colors.
Hair's nice, but there is something wrong. It doesn't looks like there is windy over there, but still her hair is soaring above her mouth? Or you just didn't draw her mouth and you hide it like that?
Last I'd like to know what is that white line down there?

Keep on drawing, you'll improve more better if you draw things you can't draw. Practise if best teacher.

^-^